I LIKE THE BOLD OUTLINES! it really shows off the OC's, like "HERE WE ARE!" the inner lines are boitufll and well drawn too, i love the interaction between them this is so so so so cool! this is the only reason i hate not having photoshop or whatever, or layers. We cant do collabs like this
BUT I LOVE IT! aww Sayu is so tiny compaired to flames! i love the way you made her necklace more and her feathers, and those outstreched wings really set the pic off! aww and flames foots!! I love it Flames!!!!!!!!!! and SAayu did goot too!!!!!!! obiously!! YAY!!
Rrrrrg, urge to be honest... I have actually never been a fan of bold outlines. I tried them on some stuff I drew once and it made it looks a bit... cut out... and in this case it makes the end of Flame's tail look kind of blunt... ...but apart from that:
I like the subtle shading you gave the wings, I've always liked that in your work, and seeing Flames from above means we see how her mane goes the full length of her body so that's a nice touch, and you've done a good solid job on the artwork otherwise too.
Chibimeze's character came out well also. Did you do the colouring on both or just Flames? Just wondering.
All in all a good picture, in general I like it... I'm just not a fan of bold outlines.